Last week's classwork

I read my classmate's essay last week, so I could know a lot of thinking. After reading her essay, I wrote that "I think you should write more." and "I think you should write details." Therefore, I think I would like to read her opinions through "Mrs. Doubtfire". However, I also have to improve my essay. I think it is difficult for me to write in English, but I want to make progress.

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